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Photographer:	X Pedro Afonso
Folder:	Pedro Afonso & E500
Uploaded:	25-Sep-2006 12:58 CEST
Current Rating:	8.00/1 View all ratings Delete my rating
Model release available:
Camera:	Olympus E500
Exposure time:	1
Aperture:	f/22
Focal length:
Lens:
Focusing method:	Manual
ISO:	250
White balance:	Clouds
Flash:	no
Image format:	RAW
Processing applied:
Various:	Levels and USM
Image resized to:	600x450

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Hola Pedro,
I like this shot very much... except the front area, which is out of focus and occupies a too large area in this photo, but does not have anything thematically or compositionally interesting. I think you should try to crop it a bit at least. This is just a suggestion.
Best regards, Pekka Nihtinen.

Pekka Nihtinen at 08:35 CEST on 26-Sep-2006 [Reply]

Perspective

I agree with the previous comment. I think the eye is drawn from the upper right corner along the blurred water. Of course I can't see what was to the left of your photo, but I wonder if taking the shot horizontally might not have been better, so that the eye moves along the water more.

Otherwise, I really like this shot.

Jim

Jim Sabatke at 12:30 CEST on 26-Sep-2006 [Reply]

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Pekka Nihtinen wrote:
> Hola Pedro,
> I like this shot very much... except the front area, which is out of focus and occupies a
> too large area in this photo, but does not have anything thematically or compositionally interesting.
> I think you should try to crop it a bit at least. This is just a suggestion.
> Best regards, Pekka Nihtinen.
>
Thanks for the comment and suggestion Pekka.
Best Regards

Pedro Afonso at 13:18 CEST on 26-Sep-2006 [Reply]

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Jim Sabatke wrote:
> I agree with the previous comment. I think the eye is drawn from the upper right corner along
> the blurred water. Of course I can't see what was to the left of your photo, but I wonder
> if taking the shot horizontally might not have been better, so that the eye moves along the
> water more.
>
> Otherwise, I really like this shot.
>
> Jim
>
Thank you Jim for the comment.

Cheers

Pedro Afonso at 13:18 CEST on 26-Sep-2006 [Reply]