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this little girl wants to be a model, always jumping in front ot the camera, and very intrested in the results, wich by the way she always like's because she is so vain!!

Photographer:	X toziena benak
Folder:	toziena's photo's
Uploaded:	10-Mar-2006 19:43 CET
Current Rating:	7.00/1 View all ratings Delete my rating
Model release available:
Camera:	Olympus E300
Exposure time:	1/50
Aperture:	F 4.4
Focal length:
Lens:	ZD 14-45mm
Focusing method:	Manual
ISO:	100
White balance:	Auto
Flash:	internal
Image format:	SHQ
Processing applied:	B&W
Various:
Image resized to:	599x800

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Nice portrait of this little girl.
Two remarks though:

-1: I would clone out that bright white spot in the ULC , it's distracting to much from the main subject.

-2: Try to leave a little more space above the head and under the chin.

Overall I like the way you portraited this young girl, also the conversion to B&W .

Well done

Fonzy - at 12:03 CET on 11-Mar-2006 [Reply]

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Fons van Swaal wrote:
> Nice portrait of this little girl.
> Two remarks though:
>
> -1: I would clone out that bright white spot in the ULC , it's distracting to much from the
> main subject.
>
> -2: Try to leave a little more space above the head and under the chin.
>
> Overall I like the way you portraited this young girl, also the conversion to B&W .
>
> Well done
>
Thanks Fons, you are right about the white spot in the ULC, but about the space above her head and chin, i chose to put her in so close because i wanted to really focus on her big eyes, she's so full of expectation to see the results,almost reaching out to grab the camera, so that's why!
But i agree that in many other portraits i need to give more space. she's nice in colour also, red hair en very blue eyes!!
And i really like it when you comment my picture's!!!
Best regards,Toziena

toziena benak at 20:22 CET on 11-Mar-2006 [Reply]