First of all the idea of shooting a strawberry falling into a glass is a good one, as are also the choice of background (white with no visible structures) and the short exposure time to freeze the water. Also the illumination is good, because there are no visible shadows.

But then there are some issues which prevent this image from being a great image:
- Individual drops of water sprayed randomly here and there, making the image looks sort of unclean.
- Then, well, the bottom of the glass is unsharp. I think this would look better if everything in the image (glass, water, strawberry) were sharp.
- I have seen this kind of shot looking better elsewhere (forgot where), because the water was more contrasty, sharp, the light was different i.e. there was sort of a shimmer making things look cooler.
You might also experiment with lightly coloured water (yellow, green, blue etc.), how that would look.

Alfred Molon wrote:
> First of all the idea of shooting a strawberry falling into a glass is a good one, as are
> also the choice of background (white with no visible structures) and the short exposure time
> to freeze the water. Also the illumination is good, because there are no visible shadows.
>
> But then there are some issues which prevent this image from being a great image:
> - Individual drops of water sprayed randomly here and there, making the image looks sort of unclean.
> - Then, well, the bottom of the glass is unsharp. I think this would look better if everything
> in the image (glass, water, strawberry) were sharp.
> - I have seen this kind of shot looking better elsewhere (forgot where), because the water
> was more contrasty, sharp, the light was different i.e. there was sort of a shimmer making
> things look cooler.
> You might also experiment with lightly coloured water (yellow, green, blue etc.), how that
> would look.
>

Thanks for your comment.