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Swans on the beach

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Swans swimming at the beach, quite unusual.

Photographer:	X Jes Consuegra
Folder:	jesito pictures
Uploaded:	20-Feb-2012 01:04 CET
Current Rating:	6.00/1 View all ratings Delete my rating
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Camera:	Olympus E-330
Exposure time:	1/500 s
Aperture:	f8
Focal length:	80mm
Lens:	Tokina 28-85mm f4
Focusing method:	Manual
ISO:	100
White balance:	Auto
Flash:	no
Image format:	RAW
Processing applied:	Converted to JPG in LightRoom
Various:
Image resized to:	717x942

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I do like this but I think you should trim most of the sky off, a little above the horizon. A full third of the picture is doing nothing! It seems well exposed and focussed but maybe could do with some increased contrast and maybe some selected brightening on the breakers? Regards, Mike

Mike Bywater at 23:13 CET on 21-Feb-2012 [Reply]

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Hi Mike,
Thanks for your comment,
I'll try what you suggest.
I kept the building to give a reference, and then I had to keep the sky as well.

Regards.
Jes.

Jes Consuegra at 01:05 CET on 23-Feb-2012 [Reply]

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I know what you mean about using the building for reference, however it is not sharp and can actually draw the eye from the subject. Having said that, all comments are entirely subjective!
regards, Mike

Mike Bywater at 21:11 CET on 23-Feb-2012 [Reply]