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Copyright ©2010, Damjan Gosak
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I took this one in Zagreb in Croatia. It's actually a room in the zoo park. This is my version of how I see it.

I would be grateful for your comments.

Greetings, Damjan

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Damjan Gosak
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Uploaded: 14-Jan-2010 18:52 CET
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I like the concept. There is something odd about the placement of the fruit. I think that I would like the composition better if it took the place of the bowl and perhaps was a little smaller.

Katrina

Katrina Adams at 21:19 CET on 15-Jan-2010 [Reply]

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Thank's for your comment. But everything on the foto is as it was. Only desaturtion and the colours on the bowl ist PP.

Greetings,
Damjan

Damjan Gosak at 22:28 CET on 16-Jan-2010 [Reply]

Landscape format

I really quite like this but something is not quite right.
I love the warm monochrome (not purely b&w?) and the colour of the fruit bowl works fairly well.
I think it may have more impact if you turn it into a landscape format, cropping jus above the window and halfway through the table?

Mike Bywater at 22:29 CET on 17-Jan-2010 [Reply]

Excellent

Damjan,

To me art is an excercise in choice...like use this subject over that, this color over that. I like the choices you made in this image, regardless if they are pre- or post production, they are still choices to express the scene.
Well done.

Mark Stodter

Mark Stodter at 18:47 CEST on 23-Sep-2011 [Reply]