I like the natural light that falls on the model. Tha tatoo is interesting. I don't like so much the direct look of the model to the camera. I think you shoul give a totally diferent atmosphere it she would look just a little to the right.

But still a very nice photo.

Greetings,
Damjan

Look where the lines in this photo are leading? The building roof lines above the model's head, the sidewalk boundaries and the building facade. They are leading to a point in the background.

I think you would get a much stronger image by keeping the same focal length, same camera position, but move the model into the background, closer to where the lines would draw the viewers' eyes.