I guess I know what you were trying to do, but somehow it didn't work. Somehow the composition and light are not that striking. Perhaps this would look better without the bottom left and top right parts. Then, the lack of sharpness in the top left part also hurts.

Alfred Molon wrote:
> I guess I know what you were trying to do, but somehow it didn't work. Somehow the composition
> and light are not that striking. Perhaps this would look better without the bottom left and
> top right parts. Then, the lack of sharpness in the top left part also hurts.
>

Alfred, Thanks for the critique. I agree lighting isn't optimal but, unfortunately, sometimes you have to work with what you have. Composition was hasty. i was trying to get as much depth as possible but it didn't work. I'll try rotating it to eliminate the excess. Paul